Friday, July 6, 2007

For Stacy...




These are some designs Stacy emailed me. She also suggested that the scene where the boy brings the master dinner and gets BEAT ON is redundant, does nothing to move the plot OR establish character, and should be removed. I agree, but what do y'all think?

3 comments:

llharris said...

yeah!!! cut cut cut! Of course I do want to emphasise the masters cruelty and saadism, but anything that will save time and isn't completly neccesary we can do without intially and then put back in if we have time and if it would spice up the story

William said...

I agree. If we have already established that the master is cruel then it might just be beating a dead horse. It might be more effective to see the master with a disdainful look on his face whenever he sees the boy, as if he thinks the boy is filthy or worthless. Plus we need to think about time restraints.

MrSuspenders said...

agree